Comments on: Feign Death (RP)

By: Syrana

Syrana — Wed, 01 Apr 2009 23:46:43 +0000

@Kimberly – Just think if she would have stored those heads in the bank for awhile D: Hmm, need to find pocket healer for the story, methinks!

@Byaghro – Honestly, no healers were hurt in the writing of this piece. I swear!

By: Byaghro

Byaghro — Wed, 01 Apr 2009 20:32:01 +0000

@Kimberly

Hey now, let’s not have random healers attacked so soon! :p

By: Kimberly

Kimberly — Wed, 01 Apr 2009 15:01:49 +0000

I never imagined how horrible it must be to lug two gigantic abomination heads back to town. Your writing brings that to life.

The snarky part of me wished there was a young healer behind Aerissa doing his own thing, and when she “feigned” Luzran would go after the healer.

By: Syrana

Syrana — Wed, 01 Apr 2009 01:42:29 +0000

@Gaming Diva – Yeah, that Luzran… I couldn’t let him be an easy take down. I almost didn’t write out that part and was going to pick it up from her getting his head, but figured that wouldn’t be fair. And it will be interesting to see what happens when she turns in those rotting heads.

@Keli – Thanks Yeah, those two guys are known by a lot of players, which made it kind of fun. And good ol’ Locke, comin’ to in the nick of time!

@Cait – Thank you for that feedback. I was sort of unsure of using some of the wording as I did, so I’m glad to hear you liked it. It’s especially interesting (to me, anyhow) because I do have a couple readers of the story that have not played the game. And I try to keep that in mind when I write these, and try not to write assuming everyone knows what certain spells are, etc.

By: Cait

Cait — Wed, 01 Apr 2009 01:35:25 +0000

I love how you change the terminology around…but I would consider it a feign death trick…or a distracting shot…instead she used many arrows and fainted, etc.

I really like that Makes the story really come to life and yet still reminds us that it has originally come out of Azeroth. It’s as if the characters are real.

By: Kelinarra

Kelinarra — Tue, 31 Mar 2009 17:37:51 +0000

Thank goodness Locke was able to distract Luzran. The story still fills us with the wild emotions of the fight with the giant abominations. Well done!

By: Gaming Diva

Gaming Diva — Tue, 31 Mar 2009 17:16:47 +0000

Very nice, something told me Luzran would be tougher than Knucklrot.

I’m curious as to how the townspeople will react to Aerissa now. Will they treat her differently?